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CHAPTER 9.5 - PAGE 21

(Transcript and visual captions below}

  Karl let out a low whistle. "Uh. Wow."

 

In which sleep is for weenies.

Ryder was waiting in the dorm elevator, and he could hear it even inside the building. Someone's horn was blaring continually. He wondered if someone had a collision and their lifeless head was smashed against the steering wheel.
Or, someone was being a total bitch, gawd! Whatever.

 

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     December 1st, 2013
     By:  Kelly

Argh I swear I should star in a sequel to Fumi's Bad Luck Foot. It'll be called Kelly's Bad Luck Right Hand. First I dumped a boiling cup of tea on it, after writing a bazillion NaNoWriMo words and comicking, then I strained the hell out of my fingers by doing some stupid data entry. AUGH! Well enough complaining. (PS check out that link above, it's totally hilarious.)

So many things coming together, the last page of our little side quest, next page is the start of Chapter 10 at LONG LAST! I'm excited, there are many things to look forward to. More BDSM, grand larceny and various intrigues!

In other news, Christopher and I won NaNoWriMo! I got just shy of 75k, omg. Starting this month we're working on editing our writing in the Horror Boys forum, feel free to mosey in with your own work and join us.

ALSOOOO! ~~THE KINGFISHER RPG~~ starts this month! There are only two slots left, so hurry over and get all up ins that. Players will get super cool avatars by yours truly and possibly get to make fun of Darren and get beaten up by Gaston-Louis. Don't miss it! :)

 

            TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Karl is in Jack's car, outside his own apartment. He's still responding with flusterment
  to Jack's casual proposition. Suddenly, Jack looks cranky, and points a finger at Karl.)

KARL:Heheh! Well, uh, if I was-- if we were gonna do something like that I’d--I’d just want it to be, like special? --And um, not like...

JACK: Hey Karl.

2.)

(Close-up of Jack's eye, wide with hypnotizing powers.)

JACK: SLEEP

3.)

(Karl is knocked out and Jack looks very annoyed.)

JACK:Phew, that was insufferable.

4.)

(Time for a bite? Jack's fangs are out, but...)

JACK: ...

5.)

(Karl is resurrected, dazed, and Jack has calmed his rage to a smolder.)

JACK: Wake up.

KARL: Huh? Oh--oh man, sorry!

6.)

(Jack makes a passable genial expression and hands Karl a business card. Karl looks mildly surprised, still out of it?)

JACK: Here’s my card, we can stay in touch.

7.)

(Close-up of Jack's business card: Jack Whitechapel, Event Promoter.)

KARL: Whitechapel? Did you get married?

8.)

(Jack isn't looking Karl in the eye as the human gets out of his car. Karl seems excited about Jack's world of subterfuge.)

JACK: No, Jack Ballard is dead.

KARL: Ohhhh! I get it. Going into hiding.Don’t people usually leave the country when-- eh, nevermind.

9.)

(Karl stands a moment in the door of Jack's car, smiling as he talks. Jack is still avoiding his eyes.)

KARL:Thanks Jack. I’m really happy we met again. I’ll make it up to you.

JACK: Bye.

10.)

(Harlan at night, with a smattering of snow in the trees.)

11.)

(The exterior of what was once a medium-fancy building, now looks like a cheap hospital or university building.)

JACK: (in voice-over) Yeah I’m outside the lobby, I’ll wait for you.

12.)

(Jack is sitting in his car, on the phone with someone.)

JACK: Hold on sweetie, I’m getting a text.

13.)

(Close up of Jack's phone with a message and photo of young Jack and Karl, posing with tongues out, having fun.)

KARL'S MESSAGE: Found this on my old phone, thought you might like to see it. <3 Karl

14.)

(Jack slams his head on the car horn in frustration.)

JACK: Just-just NO! AGHH!

 
 
 
 
 
 
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