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CHAPTER 9.5 - PAGE 20

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   There was an awkward moment, but everyone had settled down by the time Karl had his winter gear on. He still winced at the way Jack just walked out into the frigid world in a thin shirt. Maybe those cold hands weren't as uncanny as they seemed.

Nah, they were pretty uncanny.

Apparently their night was over. Back in Jack's car with the blasting heat, and Karl's apartment the destination. He might as well ask.

In which Jack takes 'stay in touch' literally! HEY O!

Karl laughed reflexively, damn that was a bad joke. Too close to home, man. Like, literally. They were right there.

    "Don't kid about that stuff," he said, stuffing his hands into his coat pockets.

    Jack looked at him with a shrug. "Well damn, if you don't want to, whatever. I was just trying to be friendly."

Well, he did say he wanted to be friends...

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     November 22nd, 2013
     By:  Kelly

Boom, look at me, getting comics done on time and everything! I'm even on track to win NaNoWriMo for the first time in three years! Next thing you know, I'll actually get that bonus done. :P

Sooo remember that exciting secret thing I mentioned? It is all up ins: ~~THE KINGFISHER RPG!~~

We've had a lot of fun doing another role-playing game on our forum, and I figured it was time to do a game in the KF-iverse. Check our thread above for more info and to put your name down for the future game which will probably begin in December sometime. We only have a few slots for players, so if you're interested, get thee hence and sign up!

            TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(In the present, Jack is driving Karl home. The inside of the car is cast in the cool filtered lights of the city at night.)

KARL: So... what about the Grey Menace? He seems so familiar. How do you know him?

JACK: I don’t know what that is.

2.)

(Karl is inquisitive and Jack is casual.)

KARL: Dude. All over the news. Superhero weirdo. Guy you were just talking to.

JACK: Oh, Demetri? I think you met him.

3.)

(In flashback / black & white, young Jack and Karl walk down a tree-lined suburban street.)

JACK: So One-Eye Paulie tells me he’s gonna slit my throat! I’m like, I’m just a kid! But--

4.)

(A shiny sports car screeches to a stop near them.)

CAR NOISE: SSSCREE

5.)

(The window rolled down, sunglasses-wearing daytime Demetri speaks urgently to Jack.)

DEMETRI: Jack, get in. Trouble at the docks.

JACK: Oh snap. Hey can Karl come too?

6.)

(Karl looks on, nervous and dorky looking.)

7.)

(Demetri props up his sunglasses to make his expression unambiguous.)

DEMETRI: No.

8.)

(Karl is alone as the sports car speeds away.)

CAR NOISE: RNNNNNN

9.)

(Back in the present, the drive continues.)

KARL: Oh. Huh... You’re probably not going to tell me more then?

JACK: Nope.

10.)

(The exterior of Karl's modest apartment building.)

KARL: (in voice over) Well, this is it...

11.)

(Karl readies himself to leave and Jack has a relaxed pose.)

KARL: Again, I’m really sorry but I hope you can forget if not forgive.
      I’d like to be cool with you at least, maybe friends someday.

12.)

(Karl rubs his forehead, avoiding Jack's eyes and making a somewhat forlorn expression.)

KARL: Can we stay in touch, please? It’d mean a lot to me.

13.)

(Jack looks casual, perhaps processing some personal and insignificant thought. Karl looks surprised.)

JACK: Are you seeing anyone?

KARL: Uh. Not really?

JACK: I can go inside if you want, I don’t have to be anywhere for an hour or so.

14.)

(Karl seems to be playing it cool displaying only mild incredulity, Jack waves his hand in a whimsical gesture.)

KARL: You don’t mean that we should...

JACK: I dunno, I figured while I was here...

 
 
 
 
 
 
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