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CHAPTER 9.5 - PAGE 11

(Transcript and visual captions below}

The house had grown very quiet as the hour strayed farther from 'too late' and more towards 'too early.' Karl began to relax a bit more after the last revelers had seemingly bugged off or found a place to pass out. The sound of their breath and the little creakings of the bed were distracting at first, and Karl had wished he'd left a record on or something, but it became very easy to ignore after a short while. Also it spared him the pain of agonizing over what album had the least embarrassing B-tracks.

In which Jack struts over the rainbow and into our hearts.

      "Oh yeah," Jack rolled his eyes at Karl's interjection in the middle of his story, "I was just so stoked to stroll back to that filthy hovel and hang out with ten thousand feral cats instead of being in a posh-assed mansion."
      "It's not a mansion! Gawd. I had to clean the entire house! Even things no one puked on. --And I didn't push you off the bed, I just... well I didn't do it on purpose."
      "Uh huh. Anyway--"

Karl rubbed his face in his slightly sweaty hands, how soon could he change the topic to something Grey Menace-ish, or... anything. But Jack was on a roll, he talked excitedly, gesturing with his hands and even breaking into wry half-smiles once in a while. He was pretty funny too, moreso if the source of humor hadn't been about how much Karl sucked.
      "--So then I was talking to Curlyfry--" Jack continued.
      "Nooo," Karl smacked his head down on the table, "Not that Curlyfry."
      "Oh yes. That Curlyfry."
Karl groaned with his head still smashed against the cold table.

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     August 29th, 2013
     By:  Kelly

Thanks for the birthday wishes everyone! <3 <3 <3 I actually had a lot of fun and it was fairly stress free. And thanks to Christopher for my great Birthday card, I asked for 'something cute', and Minchin *is* pretty cute...! I also instructed him not to kill himself in this one, he has a habit of giving me dead Christophers for holidays.

            

TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Karl kisses Jack's neck)

2.)

(Aw yeah. Jack looks like he's languidly enjoying himself.)

3.)

(Karl sits up, Jack is falling asleep.)

KARL: Heheh ummm maybe we could do the next thing huh? ... Jack?

4.)

(Karl shakes Jack by the shoulders violently.)

KARL: OMIGAWDJACK WAKE UP

JACK: Wuh huzzuwh

5.)

(Jack wakes up with bleary eyes.)

KARL: I thought you O.D.ed!

JACK: Whydja why... h..

6.)

(--and falls back asleep.)

7.)

(Karl collapses on top of him with a 'WHUMP'.)

KARL: *sigh*

8.)

(The room is lighter, Karl peeks an eye open.)

9.)

(Karl sits up with a terrified expression, Jack starts to wake up.)

KARL: Oh shit. No. NO.

10.)

(Jack groggily speaks)

JACK: Whuz wrong

11.)

(Karl shoves Jack off the bed with a cranky expression.)

KARL: I can’t believe you made me fall asleep! Now I’m gonna be in deep shit because of you! Go hide or something! DON’T TELL ANYONE or.. just don’t!

12.)

(Karl's mum enters the house to see a mess of knocked over furniture and debris.)

KARL'S MUM: Hm. I see.

13.)

(She looks in a door.)

KARL'S MUM: Karl? Are you in here or did you die before you could tidy up?

14.)

(Jack emerged from behind the bed, his shirt sitting on top of his head.)

KARL'S MUM: Karl?

JACK: Hello. I’m not Karl. I’m Jack.

14.)

(Domina is amused.)

DOMINA: Yes I don’t recall you coming out of my body. Hello Jack, I’m Domina.

JACK: You’re Karl’s mum? You don’t look old enough...

DOMINA: Aww! Am I pretty too?

JACK: Uh huh.

15.)

(Karl rushes into the room behind his mother, he's wearing a robe and his hair is wet.)

KARL: Mum YES I was just about to clean up but I was in the shower and oh Jack what are you doing in here

16.)

(Karl's all 'GROAN', Domina smiles.)

DOMINA: Jack, I’ll pray for Aldea to keep you safe on your trip home. Come see me again!

JACK: OK

DOMINA: Karl, Aldea won’t help you where you’re going.

KARL: Aw man.

DOMINA: You know where the buckets are.

17.)

(Jack struts off on a rainbow in a colorful style.)

TEXT: Time to strut!

 
 
 
 
 
 
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