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CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 22

(Transcript and visual captions below}

Demetri's mind raced as he flew as fast as he could. How could this be? Was that really Jack? The voice on the telephone sounded very strange, quavering and weak. As time passed, he became less and less sure. It had to be some ridiculous trap laid for him, undoubtedly by Theodore. The whole Circle hated him now, but they wouldn't be this swift in their retribution. If it really was Jack... How? Why? Was he working together with Theodore? Why?!

He found the garden soon enough, the whole area was clouded with a stench of flowers, obscuring other scents.
Smart. Very smart. Too smart for Theodore even. Last time that little fool had only gotten a blow in by pure luck. He was hardly worth worrying about at this point. Who else then?
He realized he hadn't even brought a weapon, and made an improvisation with a street sign, apparently disturbing a nearby motorist who sped away rather abruptly. Whatever.

As he entered the garden, lush blossoms quavering in the frigid air, he thought of one thing... The skin... Tatters of skin lying in the snow.

 

In which Demetri finds himself in the shadow play.

 

      Huh... That wasn't Theodore.

 

 

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     May 16th, 2013
     By:  Kelly

You may wonder, will I ever regret setting most of this chapter in a rose garden? NEVER! They'll never take me alive! Ahem. Well anyway, another few hours wasted drawing invisible details. You can't see it, but there's totally a bunch of rose petals scattered amidst the grass and I individually colored each of them red. Oh. Yeah.

Hey so, in other news, reader Daniel K had an interesting idea I'd like you to discuss in the comments. What would you think about a donation system where if y'all donate a certain amount, I'll make an extra comic? See thing is, I'd like to do more comics anyway, but maybe it would be a good incentive for me. Opinions? Would you do this? How much do you think would be a good amount to make the bonus worth? I was thinking maybe 100 dollars. That is to say, 100 HOT USA DOLLARS!

            TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Demetri hides behind some flowers, Jack stands in the background.)

DEMETRI: I will regret this, I’m sure.

2.)

(Jack looks over, looking a bit wobbly.)

DEMETRI: Jack...

3.)

(Demetri steps towards Jack, holding a large stop sign.)

DEMETRI: What is this? Why did you call me?

4.)

(Demetri continues.)

DEMETRI: I can only imagine this is a trap, but why? I know you hate me, but do I really deserve this?

5.)

(Demetri is unimpressed.)

DEMETRI: More importantly, why would you think it could work? Perhaps you underestimate me. There is nothing you could do that would harm me. So why do you try?

6.)

(Jack looks off at something as he speaks shakily.)

JACK: Not me...

7.)

(Demetri is skeptical)

DEMETRI: Well of course Theodore has--

8.)

(Demetri is startled by something.)

9.)

(He has stepped in something black and sticky.)

10.)

(Demetri turns, a long shadow stretches behind him, with glowing green eyes.)

11.)

(The shadow sits up, smiling, eyes glowing.)

12.)

(The dark figure grabs the sticky shadow beneath Demy's feet, and flips him over, the sign lands in the grass.)

13.)

(Above Demetri, Santi stares down at him with a creepy smile.)

14.)

(Jack looks concerned.)

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
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