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CHAPTER 11 - PAGE 13 - SORTA NSFW

(Transcript and visual captions below)

Jack was feeling Karl up as they kissed when he suddenly stopped, hands under his shirt.
Karl looked up,"Wh-whu?"
Jack glanced around in thought. "Okay you have tattoos on your neck, so you have to have them all over, right?"
      "Uh," Karl's brain had to get back in gear. "Interesting math you did there. Yeah, I admit it."
      "So I haven't seen most of them, then. What's under here? Ooh lemme guess... it's a big heart with 'Mom' on it, and an anchor?"
Karl tensed and eased his hands at Jack's sides. "Tss, no."
      "Is it ... a big Kohonese symbol for 'bravery' covered in barbed wire?"
      "Please, you think I'm 13 year old Stevia?"
      "Okay, okay... last guess. It's gotta be something goth, a black cat or a pumpkin or something. Yeah?"
Karl looked away in shame, trapped. "Just take my shirt off, you devil."

In which one good job deserves another.

      "That was... my phone. Wasn't it."
      Jack had his eyes trained on the ground. "Umm, that table is slippery."
      "No! That was the most expensive thing I owned... fuck my l--... ugh, just... ugh."
Jack sat up on his feet, "Well... on the bright side of things, that phone was kinda last gen wasn't it?"
      "My LIFE is last gen! UGH!"
      "That... makes no sense, sweetie."
      "My LIFE makes no-- okay. Yeah, you're right."
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    May 20th, 2015
     By:  Christopher

Experiment! In an effort to help with Kelly's health, I did the initial pencils and first draft of inks on this page (after he laid it out with gesture sketchery). Overall, it took longer to complete, but no one person had to be demolished by it. Hopefully with time we can get this working better. Nonetheless, hooray for us! Excelsior.

       TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

 (As Karl and Jack work to remove Karl's shirt, Jack points to the bat tattoo on the human's chest and laughs.)

JACK: Ahahaha! I knew it!

2.)

(Karl pulls Jack's face close for smoochies, and to answer his chop bustery with an unamused expression.)

KARL: Yeah yeah yeah. Jack wins forever. Happy?

3.)

(Shirtless dudes make out! So kissy.)

4.)

(Karl makes a harmless observation but Jack knows it is a hint of his secrets and looks away.)

KARL: Ha, not too sweaty this time... Remember that?

JACK: Yeah.

5.)

(Distraction by pulling Karl's pants off.)

JACK: Anyway...

6.)

(Jack noms on Karl's decorated human torso.)

7.)

(...and works his way down to something we aren't allowed to see today.)

JACK: Wow. Good job.

8.)

(Jack is opening his mouth to do something there.)

9.)

(The guys are startled by a loud and "spooky" novelty ringtone.)

PHONE:  DUN DE DUUUN      REE! REE! REE!

10.)

(Karl frantically digs in his clothes for the offending electronics while Jack waits at the couch.)

KARL: Oh God I’m so sorry! It’s-- it’s just a stupid ringtone for my boss! I thought it would be funny!

11.)

(A view of Karl's phone. It's a mass text from Hans telling people to come to his party.)

12.)

(Karl turns back to Jack, about ready to drop his pants and get back to business. As he puts his cell phone down, it slips off the table...)

KARL: Heh. So uh where were we?

13.)

(Karl looks alarmed by a sudden noise from the floor. Ksh, Karl. Ksh.)
 
 
 
 
 
 
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