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CHAPTER 7 - PAGE 12
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       Outside the hotel window, beyond the brick wall that was their spectacular view, the night was raging with whistling wind. Just like every other year, it would soon strip all the colorful leaves from the autumn trees just as people had begun to feel the spirit of the season, and then they would be stuck staring at barren skeletons for majority of the year. Darren had started sleeping in the bathtub, even he had grown tired of making a big show of disgust at the fellows in the bed next to him. Jack worried that Tristan would make the move over to the empty bed, but he never made a comment about it. Jack felt silly, all these dozens of men he seduced as his 'job' and he couldn't make a move on someone who was sharing a bed with him. He really did need a friend though, and he was afraid of losing that. Well, a friend, and to get laid. That would be nice...

In which someone wants to be considerably more powerful!

 Vitus answered his cell surreptiously as he drove down the highway.
        "Angela? Are you okay? You know it's illegal to use these while dri--"
        "Gaston-Louis, is he with you?!"
        "Uh... No? Don't tell me he left you by yourself."
        "I don't know! I'm so worried! I looked all over, what if he was gotten??!"
        "I'll be there as soon as--"
        "HELLO? VITUS? HELLO CAN YOU HEAR ME?! How does this work HELLLOO is this the talking part?! Do I talk in here? DO YOU HEAR ME HELLLLLOOO--"

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     March 14th, 2012
     By:  Kelly

Well I'm finally working out some of the kinks of this new computer. This is the first comic I've finished on it! (Well I had to go back to lying on the bed to do the HTML part but oh wells. :B ) Guess what: crazy stuff is coming. WHAT! I never say that, right? Well.. maybe I do.

             TRANSCRIPT: This is the text of the comic, for purposes such as translation and internet searches.

1.)

(Tristan poses most sexfully in his undies, lying on the unmade bed. Jack is putting on a purple and black striped sweater and looking excited.)

TRISTAN : Do you have to go out tonight?

JACK : Oh? Have any bright ideas?

2.)

(Jack gets back onto the bed in the sweater and his underwear, facing Tristan.)

TRISTAN : Hmm maybe Darren is the smart guy. We could just be lazy.

3.)

(Tristan and Jack's faces seem awfully close together...)

VITUS : Maybe we just stay in bed!

JACK : Lazy? Bed? Some of my favorite words!

4.)

(Jack looks miserably as he is cock-blocked by a call from Vitus.)

VITUS (CALL): JACK

JACK : Noooo.

5.)

(The wind rushes through the trees.)

6.)

(Jack approaches Vitus from his car, pulled to the side of the road in a forresty area. Vitus wears a long brown trenchcoat.)

JACK: This better be good.

7.)

(Jack looks worried.)

JACK: ...What does that face mean?

8.)

(Vitus has a numb expression.)

VITUS: We have to leave. Theodore has made his move. Angela is next.

9.)

(Vitus folds his hands sadly as he speaks to Jack. )

VITUS: She wants to leave... Tonight.

JACK: Leave?

VITUS: She still has connections in Kastan, there's an old estate...

10.)

(Vitus looks away as he speaks. )

JACK: Kastan!? For how long?

VITUS: I don't know... Perhaps a few years. Until this whole mess blows over.

11.)

(Jack looks unhappy and twists his hands in his sweater sleeves.)

JACK: So I wouldn't see you for a few years? No! That sucks!

12.)

(Vitus is shocked.)

VITUS: You... aren't coming with us...?

13.)

(Jack can't think of what to say.)

JACK: ...I'm so sorry. I can't. I... just can't.

14.)

(An uncomfortable parting.)

VITUS: Oh...

15.)

(Theodore zips around on wind currents, folding his arms and reclining on an errant breeze high over the city. )

THEODORE (THINKS): How funny that the wind blows without my help sometimes. God is truly on my side!

16.)

(Gaston-Louis rolls up, Katana strapped to his back.)

THEODORE: What's all this?

GASTON-LOUIS: Life ees so unfair.

16.)

(Gaston-Louis speaks, with inexplicable sunglasses and sharp teeth as ever.)

GASTON-LOUIS: How is it that you should be in this position and not me? Teach me thees power.

17.)

(Theodore smirks.)

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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